Zhor and the war of confidence

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Zhor and the war of confidence

Message  myriam assemlali le Sam 27 Fév - 12:51

Zhor is a married women and a mother of three children.She is living in the contryside of ISSAOUIRA.Her family is very poor;Her husband is a seasonal agricultural worker.
Six month before;Zhor's husband passed away in a car crash after that Zhor found her self face to face with the  real life.Day by day her situation get more and more complicated.How she can support her kids who needs food and clothes.She felt lonly in this great world.She wanted to work but she didn't know what to do.
In that moment she figure out that she had to do anything to support her her family because they represent the joy of her life .
She got support from a foundation called "the big give" they give her almost 700DHS to begun a small project in her village .She decided to sells the argan oil.Zhor worked hardly to succes her project.Now she fell like with a million dollars,with 15 employees,her busnis get bigger and bigger.
She learnt a huge lesson that she have to struggle in this life however it is bad or good .
and as she get support she have to give back .our mission is to spread the value of love and good work.

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Re: Zhor and the war of confidence

Message  Mrs HILMI le Sam 27 Fév - 18:28

Zhor is a married women and a mother of three children.She is living in the contryside of ISSAOUIRA.Her family is very poor;Her husband is a seasonal agricultural worker.
Six month before;Zhor's husband passed away in a car crash after that Zhor found her self face to face with the ;real life.Day by day her situation get more and more complicated.How she can support her kids who needs food and clothes.She felt lonly in this great world.She wanted to work but she didn't know what to do.
In that moment she figure out that she had to do anything to support her her family because they represent the joy of her life .
She got support from a foundation called "the big give" they give her almost 700DHS to begun a small project in her village .She decided to sells the argan oil.Zhor worked hardly to succes her project.Now she fell like with a million dollars,with 15 employees,her busnis get bigger and bigger.
She learnt a huge lesson :that she have to struggle in this life however it is bad or good .
and as she get support she have to give it back .our mission is to spread the value of love and good work.(who thinks so ,Zhor or yourself?)
Comment: a good writing but you have to pay attention to tenses and some spelling mistakes . Correct them and edit your paragraph on a piece of paper to hand in on Monday.

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Re: Zhor and the war of confidence

Message  Zakaria Elidrissi le Mar 2 Mar - 6:06

yép it's good Writing sister Miriiam !

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