khadija's story

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khadija's story

Message  soukayna boumehdi le Dim 28 Fév - 5:05

khadija is a divorce woman ,and mother of two girls. she lives in Herbile,a countryside of marrakech.
after divorce she found herself alone with her children without job;without money.
after two months of suffering,a foundation called "BAYTI" that helps single mothers and women who have a hard living conditions helps her with 10000 dhs to begin a small project.and she decided to open a cyber café.
She worked hard to be successful and now she's a busness woman and a member in the same foundation that helped her


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Re: khadija's story

Message  Mrs HILMI le Dim 28 Fév - 9:55

khadija is a divorce women and mother of two girls. she lives in / countryside (where , precisely?)of marrakech.
after divorce she found her self alone with her children without job without anything(what things did she and her children need?)
after two months of suffer she found a foundation wich helps [color=red] widow and divorce woman ( which foundation? and why would the association help these women?) they gave her almost 10000 dhs to begun a small project.and she decided to open a small local (what ? what for?)
She worked hardly to be successful and now she's a busness women and a mumber in / foundation(the same one that helped her?) wich helps singles and widow mothers[strike] (What does it do exactly?)

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